Basically I liked it. The above mentioned suggestions were good. UM, you might want to have a person who does well with grammar take a look and do some editing. Remember to avoid ending a sentence with a preposition. A preposition is generally a positional or spatial word. Here is the list I found when I googled "list of prepositions." Most of us don't really care one way or the other, but to those who do, notice right off. See there's one right there. LOL See how it leaves you hanging?? Right off what or where? Also punctuation can help make your sentences more understandable. I wasn't reading it for that purpose but if an English teacher were to critique it, they might make some helpful suggestions.
aboard , about, above, across, after, against, along, alongside, amid, amidst, among, amongst, around, as, aside, at, atop, barring, before, behind, below, beneath, beside, besides, between, beyond, but, by, circa, concerning, despite, down, during, except, failing, following, for, from, in, inside, into, like, mid, minus, near, next, notwithstanding, of, off, on, onto, opposite, out, outside, over, pace, past, per, plus, regarding, round, save, since, than, through, throughout, till, times, to, toward, towards, under, underneath, unlike, until, up, upon, versus, via, with, within, without
I like the colors you used and the setup. Good luck finishing the page. I hope your day went well.
